it was me who died today

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It was me who died today
wasnt you who went away
Stop the world from turning
it can't go on without you
it wasn't you who went away
it was me who died today

you said you had
so much life to live
life running through
your veins
There is so much i need to say
so much i cant understand
lets talk about the little things
lets talk about nothing really

It was me who died today
wasnt you who went away
Stop the world from turning
it can't go on without you
it wasn't you who went away
it was me who died today

If the world would stop turning
Id pluck it from the sky
i'd sell it to the devil
just to bring you back a single day
I know the truth is hard to hear
but really, it's allright
would you say it one more time
say that you love me?

It was me who died today
wasnt you who went away
Stop the world from turning
it can't go on without you
it wasn't you who went away
it was me who died today

so now i am forced to give you up
it was me who died today
now i have to say goodbye
it wasnt you who went away
i just want you to know, i love you
wasnt you who died today
was me who went away

I like that! That's my feedback.

holy ****. im gunna go kill myself now. thats kind of depressing, no?

actually i found it to be theraputic(sp?)

Its really really well written. I'm thoroughly impressed!

Rock.on.Colleen.

i like that. it's sorta depressing, but i think it would be theraputic on a bad day, ya know? i'm impressed, rock on. i especially like the third to last stanza, an interesting thought.

Kevin



"I wanna be with you forever, and tomorrow's not to late........"

<<hugs>>madonna<<hugs>>



Post Edited (03-11-03 14:07)

~lori~

awww i love hugs

Takes knives away from suicidals.. :|..

You do huh?! Hugs and holds on tight for 20 minutes#

Falls asleep@



I absolutely love her when she smiles

That was beautiful dude, lots of piano and some strings I think :-)

Cat



I am a free radical!

'apparently she is so weird and messed up, hannah had to make her promise not to f!ck me up completely'

Nice smile. That's all I can really say! Literally!



I absolutely love her when she smiles