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'Green Eyes' has the makings of a great tune.
Secondly, seeing as how your birth date is exactly the same as mine... you might want to update the 'age' part to nineteen.
That's all.
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"Live for the Dream"
SKETCH
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'Santa is a pedophile,
I don't want to see his perverted smile,
When he asks me to come near,
I'm going to run because I fear,
That if I sit inside his lap,
I'm going to feel something prodding my back
All I want for Christmas is a brand new video game,
But all that Santa wants is for me to hold his candy cane'
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You are officially sick in the head my textual friend. However, this one is very, very funny. :-)
You should try re-writing 'Green Eyes' I think. It is a good concept that seems to get a little mixed up in places.
Longer verses might help aswell.
But they're your lyrics, so I'll shut up now. :-)
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"Live for the Dream"
SKETCH
Whoa....people checking out my songs.....
it's strange, too, because I was just looking at my page and thinking, I should update or something. The only time I really update is when I write a new song, which I think I mentioned on the front page. Yes, I should fix my age.
And yeah, I wrote some pretty dirty songs when I was younger (the songs are pretty much in chronological order, the first ones were around 8th-10th grade). Hehe, now I'm interested in working on my songs again...thanks, guys!
Cheran
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Qui a besoin d'un coeur quand un coeur peut ?tre cass
i kinda agree. santa is a pedophile. think about it, it makes sense...
Message from Sketch..
I'm cool.
Meaning him.
I absolutely love her when she smiles
Sketch is the coolest.
Yes....Santa is a pedophile....at least all the ones that I meet......memories.....:shudders:
I kind of have a....preoccupation with Christmas/Santa Claus (don't want to call it an obsession just yet). I like it as a symbol of how we're all so innocent and hopeful when we're young, but then when we get older, we see how life is full of crap and almost all our dreams as kids mean nothing anymore. (yeah, I hate growing up a lot) I captured some of that sentiment in my personal favorite song "Death Wish" (though "Santa is..." is definitely my second favorite song). Anyway, I'm going to stop now before I get too bitter.
Cheran
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Qui a besoin d'un coeur quand un coeur peut ?tre cass
you bitter male and/or female.
I absolutely love her when she smiles
male
I guess people pronounce my name like Sharon, which is a girl's name, and is also wrong. The correct pronounciation is like in "push the chair in" (that always seems to help people remember), and yeah, Cheran is a guy's name. Actually was one of three great South Indian kings.
Cheran
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Qui a besoin d'un coeur quand un coeur peut ?tre cass
I deem myself king Alan.. now get me a soda chair in 
I absolutely love her when she smiles
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