The ramblings of a teenager...

wow seriously, you have some incredible talent. i'll be waiting for those songs to turn up on the radio someday! i've tried writing songs but i think i think too much, so it dosne' come out right.. ahh it's my curse.

haha the mario one was priceless hehehehe

keep writing those songs, they relaly are amazing



~?~Chris~?~
I wanna be a shooting star, across the heavens to be where you are, All your carefully worded letters, in your carefully spoken words.....

Yeah.. don't stop now jerk



I absolutely love her when she smiles

pifft if I stopped then what woul dyou have to read these days? I figure I"ll jlust save all this stuff till teacher wants something in english and then'll it'll be bam fcuk ya teach.... errr yeah

on the upside... my eyes burn..



"How far you go just to destroy yourself. Tuck in your self esteem, it's falling out"

oh my God that was awesome.. yes!



I absolutely love her when she smiles

well this time is the only time unless I can swing it with the big guy for another time.. I mean what if I get another one last chance? what then huh? WHAT THEN!



"How far you go just to destroy yourself. Tuck in your self esteem, it's falling out"

We'll go get some ice cream?



I absolutely love her when she smiles

" Through a two-way looking glass,you see your Alice."

I am trying to read all you wrote,its very thoughtful.... really pouring out here,etc..need time to read it. I think its OK for you to write.

well all right..



I absolutely love her when she smiles

well since I've got your approval rabbit, thats all that matters now. My life is complete!

sorry I meant that jokin'ly didn't mean to come off rude or nething my bad rabbit nething and everything you wanna say, and specially those things you don't wanna I wanna hear.



Post Edited (05-01-03 21:05)

"How far you go just to destroy yourself. Tuck in your self esteem, it's falling out"

That was a statement of support,of encouragement.
In response to the PREVIOUS posters comments to you....

If you feel you dont want me rsponding to you,
I will not.

Hey!! Maybe he wants to get some ice cream with me!!! :*(



I absolutely love her when she smiles

I could go for some ice cream



"How far you go just to destroy yourself. Tuck in your self esteem, it's falling out"

i wish more people didn't suck at writing

Yeah.. I here that.. :*(



I absolutely love her when she smiles

With each passing year Our time running out,
It's over too soon, but feels like forever,
The year has just begun, End almost in sight,
Each new day brings that question of right,
Sun is rising, Moon up oh so high,
Another wasted moment, gone before my eyes,

Give it up, It's not worth the fight,
Give it up, 'Cause you know I'm right,
Give it up, Please just for tonight,
All I want is another...
Just that one last chance...
To say...
Goodbye,

Sit and watch, while the clock ticks away,
The best years, The good cheers,
In class alone surrounded by friends,
Wide awake but bored to sleep,
Nobody to listen with all this wisdom,
Can't stop it, with each new day,

Every breath is a memory,
Waiting to be discoverd,
Only so long not to care,
Less ticks then before,
Bell rings and your free,
Last chance for me,

Give it up, It's not worth the fight,
Give it up, let me be right,
Give it up, just for this night,
All I want is another...
Just that one last chance...
To say...
Goodbye

Dressed to killed and no enemies,
Diploma ready you've gone so far,
Forever was gone in a blink
You'd give it all for another turn
Too bad this rides just begun,

Home alone you pause,
What happened to the plans,
Where are those wasted days,
Wishing for goodnight,
To last a second more,
You'd give it all to feel alive again,
Till you wake up in grade ten,


Give it up, you've had that fight,
Give it up, you've always been right,
Give it up, we've still got tonight,
All I want is another...
Just that one last chance...
To say...
Goodbye

It was all a dream,
Time to change,
Won't last forever,
Let's make some memories,
I can see that sun rising....


************************************

when the time is right
the past is out of sight.
the future will soon behind
you will look to your words and find
that fame is the same
to all those that share it
and fame is best worn
when one doesn't wear it
and people should be famous
doing what they love
there isn't a word that rhymes
that I can think of
you will find happiness best
if you're famous for doing what you love
never forgetting the rest



Post Edited (04-20-03 13:22)

"How far you go just to destroy yourself. Tuck in your self esteem, it's falling out"

eh. not bad.

-Mike





Go listen to my band. We're awesome.

http://www.myspace.com/rosencrantzny
weallgotwoodandnails

I approch my future, with eyes wide shut.
More afraid of success, then failling like the rest.
With each breath I take, its lost in the past.
A moment forgotten could be my last.
Then I remembered,
My life story is yet to be written,
Black pages,
Cover to cover,
Front to back,
No place to begin,
Without an end in sight,
What to do I know this ain't right?



"How far you go just to destroy yourself. Tuck in your self esteem, it's falling out"

eyes wide shut has become a bit cliche, no?

some cliches are better than others

-Mike





Go listen to my band. We're awesome.

http://www.myspace.com/rosencrantzny
weallgotwoodandnails

I like the piano playing in the background



I absolutely love her when she smiles

what does that even mean

-Mike





Go listen to my band. We're awesome.

http://www.myspace.com/rosencrantzny
weallgotwoodandnails

i figure i'll post some of mine here too... under "the ramblings of a teenager". i think skoogen and i are actually the same age.

i've been writing for awile and been playing the guitar since i was 7 years old hehe. most of my songs seem to be either light-hearted, happy, or despressing and sad...hmmm, but aren't all?

i wrote this one last night, haven't really played much of it yet, so subject to quite a few changes. it doesn't have much too it actually...i would post some of my older songs first...but they're on top of the hall closet (we have houseguests lol) and i'm lazy...

My Anwser

You're the anwser

when my darkness grows -you're my anwser
when life becomes old -you're my newness
when the sun doesn't shine too bright
you're the one to pull me up to fight
and when those walls keep falling
you tell me, keep strong darling

when the rain is pouring
and life seems gray
it's an endless day

and i just want to hear those words
that make it all better
the dark less dark
the hurt less hurt
the kiss that pulls me from my deep abyss

You're the anwser

when my darkness grows -you're my anwser
when life becomes old -you're my newness
when the sun doesn't shine too bright
you're the one to pull me up to fight
and when those walls keep falling
you tell me, keep strong darling

I try to pretend
I try to concede
but what's the use
when all i do is make up another excuse

and i just want to hear those words
that make it all better
the dark less dark
the hurt less hurt
the kiss that pulls me from my deep abyss

You're the anwser

when my darkness grows -you're my anwser
when life becomes old -you're my newness
when the sun doesn't shine too bright
you're the one to pull me up to fight
and when those walls keep falling
you tell me, keep strong darling

When i need you
you're there
my dove
my love






tell me what you think~



~Ryan~

hey!

i think ur song is really good. why in the hell do u think it's bad???

it's alright

i mean. yeah. it's alright.

-Mike





Go listen to my band. We're awesome.

http://www.myspace.com/rosencrantzny
weallgotwoodandnails

Yeah!

Hey yourself..



I absolutely love her when she smiles

same age eh? I'm 17 here, played the piano since I was umm 9 quit.. took up the drums.. for 3 years.. quit... started teachin' myself the Gi Tar abouta year and a half ago.. my band jsut broke up saddly, but me and one other guy are making another one....



"How far you go just to destroy yourself. Tuck in your self esteem, it's falling out"

i'm 17 i play the guitar a bit of piano and the kazoo

my band is full of assholes that want to change the name from Strange Days to Sinep

-Mike





Go listen to my band. We're awesome.

http://www.myspace.com/rosencrantzny
weallgotwoodandnails

yeah, 17 here too.i fiddled with the keyboard when i was younger but never really learned anything lol.

i want to learn a few more instruments though, just play the guitar



~Ryan~

ah and the title, I figured it was fitting, becuase I'm a teenager, and well I ramble a lot making no sense so basically I post my thoughts here, and then later try to make sense and music from it muwahaha so you all just get the crappy stuff.... then again I get easily distracted, ooo the simpsons are on



"How far you go just to destroy yourself. Tuck in your self esteem, it's falling out"

do i get to make my own thread and post my rambling thoughts on it? because if i can i certainly will

-Mike





Go listen to my band. We're awesome.

http://www.myspace.com/rosencrantzny
weallgotwoodandnails

hehe rambling thoughts of a turkey



~Ryan~