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how about some more opinions on my most recent song
i am kinda fond of this one

Reasons to Believe [100 Days]

How may more days do I need to feel like this?
Tripped up on your smile and in envy of your kiss,
So many more things, I could have said to you,
Reasons to believe keep me coming back to you

[Chorus]
And I?d wait 100 days just to see your face,
Walk a million miles to be with you today,
Nothing here can keep me from reaching out to you,
So let me ask the questions,
I?ll leave the answers up to you?

And how can I relate to the way that you feel,
You keep your feelings hidden and your smile out of sight,
Nothing that I say will linger on your mind,
I?m just a broken record trying to pass the time

[Chorus]
And I?d wait 100 days just to see your face,
Walk a million miles to be with you today,
Nothing here can keep me from reaching out to you,
So let me ask the questions,
I?ll leave the answers up to you?

[Chorus]
And I?d wait 100 days just to see your face,
Walk a million miles to be with you today,
Nothing here can keep me from reaching out to you,
So let me ask the questions,
I?ll leave the answers up to you?

[Bridge]
So a million years have passed,
100 days have gone,
I wait for you to show up,
Here?s the ending to this song

[Chorus]
And I?d wait 100 days just to see your face,
Walk a million miles to be with you today,
Nothing here can keep me from reaching out to you,
So let me ask the questions,
I?ll leave the answers up to you?
I?ll leave the answers up to you?
I?ll leave the answers up to you?
I?ll leave the answers up to you?



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good song



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I?m just a broken record trying to pass the time-----really like that line. I get a nice sense of rhythm from the song.



---Anyone perfect must be lying, anything easy has its cost, Anyone plain can be lovely, anyone loved can be lost, What if I lost my direction? What if I lost sense of time? What if I nursed this infection? Maybe the worst is behind---

I like it; very nicely done. So many times with songs like that (or at least with songs like how I interpret yours) it's possible to over-do things and be very cliche. Yet you managed to avoid being cliche, and have written something I wish I could say I wrote. Congratulations! You don't happen to have a recording of it, do you?

So You Guys Really Think its good. im trying to find a gutarist so i can get some music down and get my band rolling. I was thinkin of the Name Those Guys In That Place, what ya think?



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does anybody want to help me write some music to this?



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That's hard because don't really know what you hear in your head. If i was given a recording of maybe words and chording with one guitar i could try and snazz it up though.



---Anyone perfect must be lying, anything easy has its cost, Anyone plain can be lovely, anyone loved can be lost, What if I lost my direction? What if I lost sense of time? What if I nursed this infection? Maybe the worst is behind---

i wuld like it to start of a lil slow in the first verse then spead up at the chorus and keep kinda steady pace throughout the song after the first verse. Im thinking like a typical alternative/pop-punk feel



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