The only bit of criticism I would have is that your voice tends to sound kinda thin. I'd work to fill out the tone some on that. It's all really good though, i'm very impressed. One other thing not so much you guys as just however you recorded it, it sounds a bit blended and it's hard to separate out the different parts which I love to do in listening to things. Again, I really like it!
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