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Can I Get some opinons

Posted by 7WindsorCt047 


Can I Get some opinons
September 27, 2007 02:05AM
i'm wiritng some song and i was wondering if you guys could tell me what you think of some of the lyrics. Here ya go and thanks=)

?Kryptonite?

Remember when we still believed that things would work out as we planned,
That even our craziest dreams could be reached in the end,
But now I know what it?s like when reality finally sets in,
The world isn?t as pretty as in the movies or the books that we?ve read,

[Chorus]
Stars aren?t always shinning on every summer night,
The good guy doesn?t always come out on top in every fight,
Even our heroes fall down sometimes,
Even Superman couldn?t get past kryptonite

If only those stories they told us so long ago were true,
Of courageous heroes who could topple any foe,
But in the end the truth finally comes into the light,
We can?t save the world, but we sure can stay in the fight

[Chorus]
Stars aren?t always shinning on every summer night,
The good guy doesn?t always come out on top in every fight,
Even our heroes fall down sometimes,
Even Superman couldn?t get past kryptonite

So as our dreams die off, we?ll wave goodbye,
Remembering our innocence and wondering why,
Tomorrow doesn?t always bring with it a cloudless sky
[Chorus]X2
Stars aren?t always shinning on every summer night,
The good guy doesn?t always come out on top in every fight,
Even our heroes fall down sometimes,
Even Superman couldn?t get past kryptonite

and this one

What Good Is Tomorrow, If I Don?t Even Want Today

I can?t fight the feeling that I don?t want to go on,
And I can?t fight the fact that its hurts cause your gone,
Every mistake plays through in my head,
What good is tomorrow when today you feel dead?

The last time I saw you everything just felt alright,
But now I?m without you and even the days feel like night,
The bottle?s are empty, happy hour has long past,
Tonight I?m afraid that it may be my last

[Chorus]
So I?d rewrite our whole past,
Only if I could,
I?d try to make things right,
But only if I should,
I?d give everything I?ve got to see you here again,
I finally think I?m scared,
I?m prisoner to my fears,
So hold me while I?m here

There?s so much pain inside of me, that I can?t hide away,
There?s so much wrong with everything, why can?t we skip today
And every waking moment, holds another deep regret,
I wish tomorrow never came and the past could be laid to rest

[Chorus] X2
So I?d rewrite our whole past,
Only if I could,
I?d try to make things right,
But only if I should,
I?d give everything I?ve got to see you here again,
I finally think I?m scared,
I?m prisoner to my fears,
So hold me while I?m here



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Re: Can I Get some opinons
September 27, 2007 11:33AM
yes. my opinion is that you should put the links down in the absolutely-nine-days site.
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