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Lyrics to my new song...criticism needed.
"imbeciles"
the one word that doesn't do it for me -Mike Go listen to my band. We're awesome. http://www.myspace.com/rosencrantzny weallgotwoodandnails
dotards, man
dotards -Mike Go listen to my band. We're awesome. http://www.myspace.com/rosencrantzny weallgotwoodandnails
or just fools
-Mike Go listen to my band. We're awesome. http://www.myspace.com/rosencrantzny weallgotwoodandnails
cool lyric man....i'd like to hear the song when it's done. One thing that I think might be interesting is if u added a spin off of positivity, possibly in a bridge or end segment. Not something that would make it a positive song necesarrily, just a look at the other side of things, u know? anyways, it's just one of my crazy ideas, so don't take it to seriously if that's not something you'd want.
~Tommy "...now everyone elses heartbreak should be measured by my pain, and all the beauty in this world has spirled down the drain..." ~ J-money
I was going to point out the "imbeciles" part too. And I like the idiots idea. But there is something about the line. I think the phrasing is bothering me. What do you think of "Why put trust in idiots?" "Place faith" dosen't sound right to me, but then again, I have a very different style. Overall both songs sound great. I'm impressed.
well i responded third, and if that doesn't count for anything, then you can smack my sack and call me jack
-Mike Go listen to my band. We're awesome. http://www.myspace.com/rosencrantzny weallgotwoodandnails
What kind of recording system are you working with here? It seems quite odd that you are adding the drums last....drums always need to go first I thought, to set the beat, u no?
~Tommy "...now everyone elses heartbreak should be measured by my pain, and all the beauty in this world has spirled down the drain..." ~ J-money
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